Sister Wars

**girlsfightlover** · April 25th, 2011, 09:54 AM

Disclaimer: The following is a fantasy of extreme violence. People who don t like that are recommended to stop reading right here.

The action takes place at an undefined time in a future in which the things that are going on are considered as legal, if not even normal.

And finally I apologize if there should be bad grammar or the wrong words sometimes, I m not a native English speaking person. Questions or suggestions can be sent to [email protected]

It was quite warm in the office of magistrate Thornton, where Emma, I and our 14 and 13 year old daughters Jessica and Tatiana had appeared that day . The girls were the reason that we had gone there. My wife and I finally had agreed to make their wishes come true. But that decision had to be sanctioned officially.

Mr. Thornton, a thick, sweating, baldheaded man in his early sixties started with the particulars. ?Your name is Mr. Frederic Bruckner, 40 years old, businessman, living 234 Hemingway Drive, Ashlington??, he asked me. I told him, that this was the case. Then he asked my big breasted fiery redhead of wife that Emma was. She confirmed to be Mrs. Emma Bruckner, 38 years old, housewife, living at the same place as her husband and having been Ms. Emma Gardner until she got married. The girls already seemed to get a bit unpatient when he asked the blonde, already well endowed Jessica and the redheaded wildcat Tatiana the same questions. When they heard that ?pupil? was called their ?profession? here they both started giggling at the same time, but soon got quiet when they noticed they were acting like their sister each.

?Mr. and Mrs. Bruckner, we have prepared the documents you had applied for. Is it still your will to put things in the order we talked about two weeks ago?? We both said ?Yes?, clearly and firmly.

?So I will announce our decision.

The city council of the city of Ashlington grants permission to Mr. Frederic Bruckner and Mrs. Emma Bruckner to allow their minor daughters Jessica Bruckner and Tatiana Bruckner the following:

To be deadly enemies, what includes permission to do any kind of harm to each other at any time and at any place. All laws lose validity between these two individuals, their parents can cancel this regulation as long as they are minors and parents can give evidence that it is the declared will of both of them.

To recruit supporting groups during the next four weeks from now on. After four weeks between the members of that groups all laws lose validity as well.

80 % of the members of these groups have to be female. They may be maximum two years younger than Tatiana Bruckner and maximum two years older than Jessica Bruckner. All of them will be minors, so they need permission from their parents to join. Once the time for recruitment has run out the groups have to be registered by Ashlington City Authorities with a name and their official colors. As well as acting against each other they can go at war with any other group that belongs to the same age segment and consists out of a majoity of female individuals?.

Magistrate Thornton now spoke to our children:

?Jessica Bruckner, do this regulations express your will?? ?Yes, they do?, the blonde teenage bombshell hissed, glaring wildly at her beloved sister. ?Tatiana Bruckner, do this regulations express your will?? ?Oh fuck, yes, they do!? the redhead yelled, glaring at Jessica the same way she glared at her.

?So they will come into effect an hour from now?, the fat official who hardly could hide how aroused he was snarled. ?Family Bruckner, I wish you a nice day!? We left him, sitting in his sweat and what other juices ever.

tbc

**Ted Mark** · April 25th, 2011, 02:26 PM

Tatiana is my ex wife's name - make her fight be extra rough...
WAR !

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**girlsfightlover** · April 25th, 2011, 02:43 PM

Do you like the approach?

**athelas** · April 25th, 2011, 05:11 PM

Sounds great!

**girlsfightlover** · April 30th, 2011, 08:19 AM

In the evening of the same day we all four went to the Rookies battlefield, a public place where always a huge number of youngsters was hanging out and where it was possible to do organized fights in front of an audience. Many parents used to bring their kids there if there was something to settle with another child and they wanted to make sure that it not happened somewhere in a backyard but that the right people took notice of what their offspring could do to others. The scouts of the most important gangs always were around there, and also were a lot of kids and youths who still had not been recruited. by anybody. You needed approval to fight there, though, who wanted to scrap spontaneously had to go somewhere else.

Like I said it was quite usual that parents brought their kids there to fight. A bit more unusual was that a mother and a father brought their teenage daughters, approaching the spot in separate cars and both wishing the worst to the child the other one would bring. Jessica and Tatiana had been fighting each other all their lives. And in elementary school already it turned out that I really preferred to see Jessica on top while Emma was hoping for Tatiana to dominate her rival. And from some day on we could not hold back anymore but cheered them on loudly and without holding anything back. It did not heal the girls rivalry and it affected our own relationship in the one or other way too.

I had an excited but confident Jessica sitting at my side while we drove there. The permission Magistrate Thornton had granted hours before first of all meant that they now were allowed to use weapons on each other in public space. For this evening that meant brassknuckles at their fists and heavy, steel toed combat boots at their feet.

We arrived quite at the same time and parked our vehicles next to each other. The girl just ignored each other here, while my lovely wife spit into Jessicas face and displayed me her middle finger. I just whispered ?You are dead meat, fucking cunt!? into Tatianas ear. Both girls stayed unimpressed, but they knew there crazy parents long enough to do so.

The fight was scheduled for 9:30 pm, and both girls and their seconding parent were lead into different directions to get a free locker room. Those were located on the backsides of the stands. There was space for around 2.000 spectaters around a piece of lawn that was the battlefield. The atmosphere was heated out there because there was a battle going on between two larger groups of 10 and 11 year old girls out there right at that moment and as far as I noticed there had been fatalities. Jessica was fully focussed on her upcoming brawl now though and did not notice anything that was going on around her. She wore a tight black leather pants, a tight black leather top, her brassknuckles and her boots were all black as well.

We were told to appear in the arena so I lead my girl out there. Emma and Tatiana came through an entrance on the opposite side. She was dressed quite like my baby, only that her Top, pants, boots and knuckles were held in the exact color of her red hair. I had to admit to myself that she looked tremendous, too.

A woman in her early twenties introduced our girls to the at least 400 people who were standing around, most of them teens like them. The rules were announced. The fight would be going on until one would be totally unable to go on, the winner would be granted half a minute to do further harm to her once that point would be reached. They both did not want fatalities here, because their real dream was to go at war with each other as leaders of rival gangs. And this was most likely going to happen four weeks from now. They also both knew that they would get bored if the other one would not be around any more. At that stage of their relationship they needed each other as much as they hated each other. Then both girls were called to the center of the arena and ordered to start the hostilities.

They circled around each other for at least one minute, hoping to find a way to catch the hated sister by surprise. But they both had to notice that their rival was totally focussed and not ready to start with an unforced error to make it easy for her foe. As far as I could see from my place at the side of the lawn they weren t talking out there in the centre of the battlefield. Just circling each other, fully concentrated, to jump their supposed victim in the right moment. A few of the spectators already got impatient, but that obviously neither affected Jessica nor Tatiana. They then suddenly jumped forward right at the same time, exchanging heavy blows to their bodies and faces. Jessica connected first to Tatianas nose, and I could see that she had drawn blood there immediately. Tatiana on the other hand had landed a heavy right to Jessies stomach, and Jessie heavily gasped that second while Tatianas other fist exploded under her chin. But she was not really affected so far, stepped back and threw a devastating kick to her enemies head. It opened a cut over the redheads left eyebrow, made her stumble a bit, but she didn t fall and she also did not seem to be too impressed. She answered by hitting Jessicas crotch with her left boot. Icould see that my baby was in pain, but the only reaction she showed was displayed by her lips. Both girls went closer to each other now again, starting to turn each others faces into bloody messes by exchanging a lot of brass knuckled punches. They first of all went for the noses, and out of both of them a lot of blood was running. But also jaws and cheeks got worked over. Both girls didn t do much to defend themselves. They wanted tu hit, hurt and mark their rival, no matter what it would cost them. I kept pretty silent, as did my beloved wife as I noticed. We both were just proud and fascinated what stunning, tough and brave little warriors we had produced.

At some point both were unsecure on their feet though. They had to clinch now, exchanging headbutts as well as trying to hit each others crotch or stomach with their knees. Their blood was running down their own bodies and their rivals body as well.

I could not really see what at least made them sink down onto the grass, still in a clinch. They now struggled down there to get the upper hand. I saw brass knuckle covered hands in each others face, each others hair, at each others throat. But both seemed to be too weakened now to achieve an decisive advantage and both still could take enough to stand their opponents more or less desperate attempts to put the battle to an end. Then suddenly Jessica covered her face with her hands in wild pain. Tatiana had driven her thumbs into both her eyes heavily seconds before. Tatiana did not react very fast, but fast enough now. She forced Jessie's arms under her knees, sitting upon her foes upper body, throwing devastating punches again to the unprotected face of her enemy. Blood splashed around, but Jessica still wildly tried to come free. Tatiana went on and on, the movements of her now beaten and battered foe got weaker and weaker, and at some point somebody blew a whistle to show that the last half minute of the action would start now.

I saw that Tatiana said something to her victim, and I noticed that Jessica slightly moved her head, trying to respond it seemed. Then Tatiana left her position, knelt down beneathJessicas lower body, pulled down her rivals leather pants and immediately started penetrating her with her right fist, still wearing her brassknuckles. ?NO!? I yelled, but I had to continue watching this, fascinated, and even a bit proud of this little bastard of a daughter who I had learned to really hate over the last years. What a mean, dirty bitch at her young age! It seemed to take an eternity until the whistle blew a second time. The crowd rhythmically cheered her on. The fast, rhythmic movement of my younger daughters right arm and my older girls body quivering in agony made me cum right there. I noticed that my wife on the other side of the lawn was in a quite similar mood.

After the whistle blew a second time an also battered and totally exhausted Tatiana sank onto the lawn, shortly raising her arms in the feeling of victory, but at that moment as well as her defeated enemy unable to leave the spot on her own feet. Emma and I walked over to ?our? girl each, taking care for them. Her face displayed pride, hatred and triumph wehn our eyes met. I could not hold back and spit at her. She ignored it. Both girls looked pretty bad, but the medicine of these days was able to repair anything but death in a very few days for those, who could achieve it. And Emma and I could.

So helping our girls to recruit their gangs was our next task to be fulfilled..

**Ted Mark** · April 30th, 2011, 10:11 AM

People are animals. That's not a putdown. We are human animals. So we are going to engage in all the animal passions occasionally.

The roman arena was an extreme. But look at how interesting these things are - News Reports show footage of fighting - while shaking their heads in disapproval
YouTube - Mom takes daughter to a fight
or
http://youtu.be/huCm99XCOhc

The truth is we love this stuff.

**girlsfightlover** · April 30th, 2011, 10:43 AM

Originally Posted by Ted Mark

News Reports show footage of fighting - while shaking their heads in disapproval

In the world of my story it would have caused a news report if someone witnessing the action would have shaken the head in disapproval...

Hope someone liked it a bit. I want to go on with that stuff, and that only makes sense if someone likes to read it. Is there a way you could eliminate "prologue" in the headline of the thread? I want to post anything related to this story at the same place...